I really like the way the entire design looks like it is swirling toward the center to give the illusion of depth. Very well done. Every single part of it supports the whole. The solid black and dotted black are also effective techniques to support the illusion. -- Sue
- on November 7, 2018
I like the way you made the ribbon affect - very realistic. And the “l’s” do not have to be the same. They look more artistic when they each have their own characteristics. If they were the same they would look mechanical. Nice job! -- Sue
- on November 7, 2018
I like the way you described the dreamlike state of the artwork. I really got a sense of you floating. Great descrption and execution. The colors were very successful and helped to support the dream. Grandma. -- Sue
