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I see the circle in the center. This provides a variation within the black frame. What if other circle shapes repeated that in other areas? Nice use of repetition within your design.
- Grandpa on February 6, 2024
I see them circle in then center. This provides a variation within the black frame. What if other circle shapes repeated that in other areas?
- Grandpa on February 6, 2024
 
Technically how did you create this composition. I suspect an element using graphic illustration apps but need more insight. Have you tried it with a background less solid maybe gradual value transition.
- Grandpa on February 6, 2024
 
Nice feel to this abstract piece.
- Grandpa on February 6, 2024
 
Beautiful colors
- Grandma Deb on February 6, 2024
 
Way to go Bubba!
- Grandma Deb on February 6, 2024
 
Nice optical illusion
- Jordan on February 6, 2024
 
Good job
- Jordan on February 6, 2024
 
Nice
- Jordan on February 6, 2024
 
love the colors Bubba!
- Grandma Deb on February 6, 2024
 
Those are always fun to do.
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
Those are always fun to do.
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
Colors are illuminating and have a neon appearance. Is that difficult to control?
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
What scale is this assemblage size? It appears large.
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
Nice piece
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
Interesting layers
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
I like your piece. You will have to explain the techniques you used.
- Grandpa Scott on February 6, 2024
 
I like this collage appearance. The animated character overplayed on the photo background. His teeth make me chuckle.
- Scott on February 6, 2024
 
Aaaaagh!
- Scott on February 6, 2024
Quite expressive. This is a reaction to what exactly? I like the shapes and colors chosen.
- Scott on February 6, 2024
 
I enjoy that you repeated colors and shapes which establishes a strong compositional balance. Think about using similar shapes that are different sizes. Overlapping some shapes on the boundary rectangular edge is a nice consideration because it suggests depth or space and more interest to the composition.
- Scott on February 6, 2024
 
I like your design.
- Scott on February 6, 2024
 
Is it done on a tablet app?
- Scott grandpa on February 5, 2021
Is it done on a tablet app?
- Scott grandpa on February 5, 2021
Not sure of your technique on this one. But colors used are vibrant
- Scott grandpa on February 5, 2021
 
I like your abundance of color. Was this spin art with the star overplayed after?
- Scott grandpa on February 5, 2021
 
Is this a portrait of some one you know?
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
The intriguing fish tank. Very well thought out jordan
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
Nice use of colors which adds depth and importance to figures
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
Crazy textures. I can relate
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
I see creatures with faces and many bright colors. Yet still abstracted
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
Dark yet interesting
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
Nice work
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
I like the facial expression in the center
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
I enjoy you are exploring and creating in mediums of art you are less familiar with. Yes leaf sculptures will change as it dries. Try glueing it to some backing that is thicker or place clear plastic sheet of mylar over it with the edges of plastic glued to backboard
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
Is that a kneaded eraser sculptural figure? Very creative use.
- Scott on January 9, 2021
 
I enjoy the way you captured the icy wind. Brrrrr.
- Grandpa on January 9, 2021
 
I have been wondering that myself. But not my hairline though.
- Grandpa on January 9, 2021
 
Good job Jordan, you drew a very proportionate face along with arranging the figure in the page. Nice staff/glider as well. You are paying close attention to details you find to be important.
- Grandpa on January 9, 2021
 
looks like you're having fun:)
- Grandma Deb on September 30, 2020
 
good job keep being creative
- grandpa Scott on April 29, 2020
i enjoy your circular motif. what's a motif? look it up. i suppose this was inspired by the globe and the continent shapes being green. i like that you faded the lines into the blue. Consider adding something in the area surrounding the circle. It could also have color or lines that would make that negative space more interesting. good marker drawing, keep being creative.
- Scott on April 29, 2020
 
I enjoy your choice of glaze on your ceramic form. Keep being creative.
- Scott on April 29, 2020
 
Good job bud!
- Daniel on April 29, 2020
 
Nice job Bubba!
- Grandma Deb on November 20, 2019
 
Looking good Bubba!
- on November 20, 2019
Looking good Bubba!
- on November 20, 2019
 
Good job Bubba!
-- Deb
- on November 20, 2019
 
Great job Bubba!
-- Grandma Deb
- on November 20, 2019
 
Nice exploration in mixing different mediums and creating nice textures within the watercolor pools.
-- Grandpa S
- on November 20, 2019
 
I see it. A fish flying a kite on a river under a rainbow. Good work and very creative. Keep your dreams alive and on paper.
-- Grandpa S
- on November 20, 2019
 
I enjoy seeing different things even if is intended to be a bird. You mastered the transparency of overlapping watercolors and the beautiful textures one can create within the medium.
-- Grandpa scott
- on December 13, 2017
 
Nice colors Jordan!
-- Dan
- on November 22, 2017
 
Good job!
-- Dan
- on November 22, 2017
 
Cool!
-- Dan
- on November 22, 2017
 
Nice job Bubba! Love the colors
-- Deb
- on November 22, 2017
Good job!
-- Dan
- on November 20, 2017