Elizabeth38613's Comments (14)

I love your use of creativity that expanded beyond the shoes. The background and lighting is incredible and your value tones match it perfectly. You perfectly balanced the shoes in the front to the house in the back and it created a beautiful piece.

The way it’s placed shows when how shoes are place when we come home and throws them in a pile. The color choices works really well with each other showing the dark parts and a bit of the light coming through. The addition of the door and stairs makes it more like home.

The color scheme of this piece is very visually appealing. It is enjoyable the way that the artist used contrast to create the image of the sky and sea while keeping it somewhat monochrome to create harmony and unity. The ship is a nice contrast of warmth in the cool sky.

I like how you used a box to map out the perspective. Additionally, the visual design of the shoe itself is really nice. I’d just say the perspective is a little off near the bottom lace area but other than that its great.

The way the shoe looks old is very satisfying. The wrinkles make it look worn out and very used.

The use of values allows the artist to create facial structures. The overall coloring of the piece is warm.

The different rolls and practices shows the progress of making the rolls is really creative.

This rendering is very realistic and I like the shading a lot.

This composition has a strong rule of 3rds and creates a triangle shape that assists the viewers eyes in enjoying the piece.

The way you layered the colors and added shading gives the rolls a beautiful sense of depth and texture, making them look soft and vibrant like fabric.

The way you dramatized the paper rolls and the vibrant color choices really added emphasis and depth to your drawing.

I like the gesture of the first drawing on the top right.

I really like the unrolling of the roll and he shading style; gives the art a distinct feeling.

I love the sketches you illustrated and took inspiration from. I also enjoyed how the composition of your page was neat and organized, but still very fun to look at.